<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" version="2.0"><channel><title><![CDATA[Edited with Erin]]></title><description><![CDATA[Freelance fiction editing]]></description><link>https://www.editedwitherin.com/blog</link><generator>RSS for Node</generator><lastBuildDate>Mon, 31 Aug 2026 12:14:02 GMT</lastBuildDate><atom:link href="https://www.editedwitherin.com/blog-feed.xml" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml"/><item><title><![CDATA[Show vs. Tell Takes a Coffee Break]]></title><description><![CDATA[Today, a mundane yet mildly befuddling, real-life encounter in the coffee aisle of my grocery store that became a handy study in characterization and show versus tell.]]></description><link>https://www.editedwitherin.com/post/show-vs-tell-takes-a-coffee-break</link><guid isPermaLink="false">6a888b190df120a48ef8b2af</guid><category><![CDATA[Show vs. Tell]]></category><category><![CDATA[Character Work]]></category><pubDate>Fri, 21 Aug 2026 17:50:15 GMT</pubDate><enclosure url="https://static.wixstatic.com/media/b0978b_95135b6990764525a13a550ee68f5850~mv2.png/v1/fit/w_1000,h_1000,al_c,q_80/file.png" length="0" type="image/png"/><dc:creator>Erin Rice</dc:creator></item></channel></rss>